New Years Eve
The bright lights hover over my eyes
Making resolutions to leave the past behind
The clock suddenly becomes everybody's friend
Can you hear the clock ticking?
TIK, TOK, TIK, TOK
The hands of the clock waving at me every second
Friends and family come from all over the world
Everybody will be sad to leave
Let the moment live, Happy new years eve
It's was super good I loved how you used a good Alliteration and Hyperbole. Keep up the good for next time.
ReplyDeleteHi Sina, I really enjoyed reading your poem. I really liked the part where you placed a rhetorical question. I also liked the drawing ( you have talent ).
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Holo Sina I love your drawing but maybe next time do it in colour.
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